The game of slice and dice

by LoVeAbLeShOrTie   Jun 22, 2005


Slice and dice..
Sounds like a fun game
I hear it takes away all your pain
Well for a little while at least
I’ve never played it but they say its fun
You make waterfalls and streams of red
Pretty colors flow through your head
Sometimes it makes you go to sleep
Must be a good game to play before bed
They say if you play it enough all your worries and pain flow away
And you never have to deal with them again
This game….hmm is it true or make believe?
Should I play or sit back and watch my life waste away??

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  • 19 years ago

    by BloodScars

    hey haily i know what ya mean....course only one of my friends followed in my footsteps..and it better not b too...*cough*cough*

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Babe I've played that game b4 and I don't want you ever to. I f u c k e d up my life with this game and it gets you nowhere. I want you to promise me you never will and if you ever think about it you will tell me. I feel real bad though too. Like I brought the idea to the group cause I was the first one to do it and then ashleigh did and then sam, paige, amanda did and I feel it's my fault cause I did it first and gave them the idea. Just remeber, cutting away the pain doesn't help. Things just get worse in the long run. BTW, great poem. I think it was one of your best.
    Love you always girl,
    Haily
    xoxoxoxoxxo

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Great poem! 5 I've played that game! *tear*tear*

  • 19 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    Truthfully, i didn't like it at all. the form, rhyming, it didn't seem right to me. I like alot of your other poetry though, this just didn't speak out to me.

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    This poem is kind of sad but I give it a five. I hope that you just enjoy writing about this and not doing it in real life.

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