wow i loved your poem loved your language too 5/5 keep it up

I agree. This lesson does not have to be learned the hard way. It will destroy you . Your heart bleeds with every cut. Sry for being a hypocrite but please don't go there...awsome poem.

thats really good exept one thing this poem makes your life seem like a game. like your playing with living and dieing. i understand where your comeing from though and i loved the poem

wow this was a great poem. i really like how u compared life 2 a game. life is a game full of ups and downs & shit like that. but that game u r talking about dont do it. its not worth losing everything over it. keep writing!!!

Hey guys, thank you for ur advice and i promise to all of you that i wont ever cut!!
luv u always,
*~*evans*lil*hottie*~*

AWW HUN this is awesome. but u need to promise on mine and evan and sam and haily's lives that u will never cut. yeah it may take away the pain but it also takes away loved ones. trust me i would know. they get mad at u and might even never talk to u again. if u know wut im sayin. well just dont ever do it. ok. Anyways I LOVE YA FOREVER,
***aShLeIgH***

This is a poem to make you think. I like thinking. lol. Well good job. I don't know why but I like dark poems like this even though most of mine are love. The most recent ones have been more and more gruesom. Check some of them out. Deadly Whispers, Last Testament of a Dying Soul, Tribute to my Lost Love, One More Time. I might have one more but I can't remember. Thanks for posting yours though. I really enjoyed it. kilman = David B. 5/5 all the way to mexico!!

im a cutter and I no it sounds bad but it makes u feel so much better but than u have to live with covering up the scars 4 the rest of u life its ur choice and great poem check out some of mine

Hey, thats some great wording on an interesting side of the topic, I like your language, very well put together! Keep Writing!
luv kt

this poem was good...it had meaning..dont start the game!!!! listen to the people who commented PLEASE dont start.
this poem shows that people are making it out that slice and dice is a game when its really a disorder one that alot of people have.
thanks for sharing.
try work on it a little to make it flow better. xxx

This poem is kind of sad but I give it a five. I hope that you just enjoy writing about this and not doing it in real life.

Truthfully, i didn't like it at all. the form, rhyming, it didn't seem right to me. I like alot of your other poetry though, this just didn't speak out to me.

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

Great poem! 5 I've played that game! *tear*tear*

Babe I've played that game b4 and I don't want you ever to. I f u c k e d up my life with this game and it gets you nowhere. I want you to promise me you never will and if you ever think about it you will tell me. I feel real bad though too. Like I brought the idea to the group cause I was the first one to do it and then ashleigh did and then sam, paige, amanda did and I feel it's my fault cause I did it first and gave them the idea. Just remeber, cutting away the pain doesn't help. Things just get worse in the long run. BTW, great poem. I think it was one of your best.
Love you always girl,
Haily
xoxoxoxoxxo

hey haily i know what ya mean....course only one of my friends followed in my footsteps..and it better not b too...*cough*cough*