There was a girl

by Reem O   Jun 22, 2005


There was a girl who didn't bother anyone
She was kind,sweet loved having fun!
Every one loved her and always dreamed on!
She didn't care if she stayed all alone
A day came by where she became a grown
looking so pretty just like a dove

There she was with her first love
looking so happy and not said life was tough!
She loved him and he loved her
they always made it when they were together

She always loved to whisper to him and said "i wont leave you for ever"
She always warmed him when he shivered
she always gave him the love he deserved
But then her life turned around..
every thing became so dark and couldn't make it to her way home!
but then her love called her on the phone
and told her i can't make it any more!
she asked for the reasons and couldn't make it to the door!
he told her iam sorry but now you can't open your eyes any more!

She was always locked inside her room and never said a word!
Counting the days wishing her life is short!
She always asked for her love and always prayed to the lord!
She always cried but couldn't see her tears
Begged for her love and said why can't you be so near?
The dark in her life was her only fear
She always cried but there was nobody to hear!!.......

The girl was blind and miserable until the moment of her death I hope you vote and comment if you like it or not!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jessie

    Hey..Thanks for the comment on my poem. =)
    I really loved this one, it actually made me teary eyed..you have alot of talent...Keep up the good work! 5/5

    -Jess
    xXKeep Up The Good WorkXx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brook

    Good write 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by CuRsed AnGEL

    very good poem it sounds like when I broke up with my girlfriend for the first and last time hoped to hear so more lost love poems soon

  • 19 years ago

    by Carissa Rae

    this is a great poem. it was way better then my poems. just keep write i would love 2 read more of ur writing