this is such a good poem, so deep and fluent. you really do have a way with words, all you poems are so natural and pure. i think you may be my favourite poet on the whole site, apart from me of course (only kiddin). i hope you get the time to write loads more soon. and i really love this poem, i am going to go and read it again. :D

Not your best, but still written intelligently 4/5

Sorry to hear you aren't around so much these days...neither am I to be honest.

Another intelligent poem from you though...

Kia Kaha ~ Stay strong

lol