another great poem by you. great job. cant wait to read more

Very good poem and i liked the way you put it, it was rather exciteful. I liked the way you carried it on as if it was your last dieing breath that you were trying to speak this to the person. Wonderfully done. I think that it is a very well done poem and i give it five/five.

P.S. thank you for your comments on my poem, i really appreciate them and always try and return the favor.