Firstly, No matter how much you are hurting or hate some one- dont kill them unless you have a weird mental problem and cant help it, 2) this poem effing rocks and 3) your a great writer voted 5 *hugs* cya later love SNTR.

That was almost offensive. I mean, the poem rocked, but the sickness that rocked inside of it *wipes brow* now there was some darkness.
I suppose anger does that to us.
And this was some serious anger.

//T.L.//

Wow. *Stares with her mouth wide open* That was like.. Amazing.. It was way beyond dark, it was so hateful and powerful, gripping..Amazing Job.

Fricken scary, disturbing, icky, insane..

i love it.. amazing, i love the story, the rhyming,the flow, everything.

5/5

`tiny`heart

This is a nice poem! more like a story but i loved it!

i loved the part when u darged her and all! it was cool!

keep it up!