I loved it very well written 5/5

Awesome poem!! Top job I voted 5 :P All your poems are soo deep but O so awesome!! One of my fav writers definatly!!! Love SNTR.

Great Poem, i found my self singing it. (weird i know) but sirisly - this could be a kick @ss song, the only thing is the drew a picture on my wrist with a twist part, that very-umm over used i guess, as a siggy in alot of message boards. it works tho, and i myself have also used things like that for inspiration, or tidbits in my poems, i warn you tho not to over use them. or you'll get in trouble..lol.

5|5

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&&&&&& i love the ending, very dramatic.. lol..

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I like this poem but i think you could do a better ending than the one you had (soz) the one you gots good but it isn't as good as the rest of the poem#1 still gave it a 5 though!