*wipes eye* So sad hunny!!! Im sorry :( I hope you feel better soon and everything turns out for you..Really I do. This is awesome but o so sad..Excellent work though. Nice job *thumbs up, hugs you* Love SNTR.

Awesomw poem....

Amazingly written :)

Truth be told, i dont really love this one, it kind of is annoying(no offense). but alot of the lines were way to long, or short, depending, maybe im reading it wrong but thats my opinion,

the story was good, along with some of the anguage, but i think that could use improvement as well.

4|5

«Tiny Heart»

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