hellooooooooooooooooooo again my friend! i am in luv with this poem and just 2 let u know, i don't think of it as an attempt, u made yourself very clear and u put your feelings into words AWESOMELY!!! I give it a 5 hun dunno why no one's commented/r8d yet....glad your mother liked my poem! :) Tell her i said hi and THANK YEW...u know i never would've realized u were a blonde, you're very intelligent...LOL JUST KIDDING!!! I know many blondes are intelligent, i like the blonde jokes too hahaha they're hilarious! Peace and Lotsa Bunches of Luv N Hugs, //ari\\

P.s.- Your poem is better than mine case closed. INFINITY :P Plus it's longer haha

......hey!
YOU'RE NOT BEIN FAIR!!!!

U USED BIG WORDS U KNOW I'M SLOW LOL
*opening case* ...............
....................................................
........what wuz i gonna say? Whatever. *closes case and locks it then swallows the key*
I feel like i'm nine years old again lol XP
Peace for now ~lil slam~ hahahahahaha *my evil laugh* Luv and Hugz, //ari\\

P.s.- Another reason y u're not bein fair, I SAID INFINITY!!!

....................I'm BAAAAAAAAAACK.

*carrying a gas tank, douses the NEW case and strikes a match* *lets the match fall on2 the case and runs away* Ka-BOOM.

Remember I <3 Yew ~lil slam~ lol! Peace and Luv, //ari\\

well the person who gave u a one they suk...................................and.......U GOT MORE VOTES!!! BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG DIFFERENCE I C THERE!

Unconditional Luv Always ~lil slam~, Peace! Luv, //ariana\\ ^_____^

well, FINE, let's c then.......count all your comments and i'll count mine. Deal?

LOL LUV 4 U BUNCHES AS ALWAYS ~lil slam~ Peace! Luv, //ari\\

well..........for real i wasn't gonna count mine either lol!

But u get comments too........

.......or did those new comments come from us havin this arguement lmao

Luv Ya Lots ~lil slam~ Peace! //@r!\\

well, think of THIS ~lil slam~ a lotta of those comments are from another member who is having a conversation w/ me cuz we live near each other and we don't have the email or anything and even tho we have each other's phone# we don't feel like getting on so we just comment each other back n forth lol! So i don't have more comments bcuz of the quality of my poetry, it's just a reeeeeeeeally long conversation like we r having lol again....so yes HA!!!

Luv Yew Lots More Than Yesterday Hun! Peace, //ari\\ :P

Not your best, but not a bad idea 5/5