thats an awesome poem, really well written 5/5

Its really good. So real....you dont want to do it after you have started.

This was a great poem. I can tell you're a great writer just by reading this one ... great job keep writing~

That's so sad...it brought tears to my eyes...i just love the entire thing...keep on writing and keep your head up *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Hey soz its a little late but this poem is so awsum! 1st time i read it i was suicidal and it made me kind of hav a re-think over what i was doing. thank you heaps! check out sum of my work if ya get the chance. keep it up!
Live Strong!

Very nice, i really enjoyed this, loved the start, loved the ending good job.

This is a really good poem keep up the work

Excellent! I love this poem b/c its a cry to teens and their parents about how communication is KEY to keeping "check" on one another.... If my mother and I had our conversation in my teens years, I guarantee that our relationship wouldn't have been so damaged before. We both great now, but I wish others would just sit down and literally TALK the SHIT with their parents.... Get everything out in open.... always better! GREAT POEM...