Endless tears

by Hot_Trav_lover   Jun 22, 2005


Running down my face
thinking of how i'm a big disgrace
hating the fact that i'm not good enough
it so incredibly tuff
i love how you hold me when i am crying
but hate when your not trying
i try to ignore it all
until your next call
i miss you like crazy all the time
can go back its all mine

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  • 19 years ago

    by x-Beth-x

    - Your good at writing but all of your poems are forced. The rhyming is forced. Your trying to hard just let it flow. Keep writing !!! ♥ -

    -♥-Anarchy-♥-

    I ♥ Cereal

  • 19 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    the last line confuses me, its as if it comes out of no where...
    like the pome though... its good.

    ~Breeze