by Hot_Trav_lover Jun 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Running down my face |
by x-Beth-x
- Your good at writing but all of your poems are forced. The rhyming is forced. Your trying to hard just let it flow. Keep writing !!! ♥ - |
the last line confuses me, its as if it comes out of no where... |