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by blackrose1011
the last line confuses me, its as if it comes out of no where... like the pome though... its good. ~Breeze
by x-Beth-x
- Your good at writing but all of your poems are forced. The rhyming is forced. Your trying to hard just let it flow. Keep writing !!! ♥ - -♥-Anarchy-♥- I ♥ Cereal