Comments : Endless tears

  • 19 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    the last line confuses me, its as if it comes out of no where...
    like the pome though... its good.

    ~Breeze

  • 19 years ago

    by x-Beth-x

    - Your good at writing but all of your poems are forced. The rhyming is forced. Your trying to hard just let it flow. Keep writing !!! ♥ -

    -♥-Anarchy-♥-

    I ♥ Cereal