by Char Jun 22, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
One of my more recent poems... Please take a few seconds to comment or vote! I'm still a beginner, and I would love some insight! Thank you very much... |
by LOOPE
WOW, Amazing poem!!!!!!!! Great job, I loved it, every part of it, great choice of words and reads smoothly. 5/5 |
by Mandy Lou
Are you sure you're a begginer? That's a great poem! 5/5! |
i love it!!!!! please keep writing coz i love reading them! i think u have some of the best poems on this site! xxx luv steph |
by Angie
Well Char, I do have to agree with everyone above me. This is truly an amazing poem. You have talent my friend, so keep on writing. Also, this poem is just so true and for someone so young as you to see how this world and the people in it are, why can't everyone else see it too and voice it like you have, then maybe something would get done. Wonderful job!!! |
by Andrea
wow...i really really like this poem. for a beginner your really good. keep it up! definitly 5/5!! thanks for comment on my poems. |