Good Poem... I REALLY liked it... Keep writing poems cuz ur really good...

that's really sad!! i like it! good work!

*Cries for a while until actually writing a comment* omg. that's so sad. At first I thought she just moved to another person but I was so shocked when you said she was dead. Nice work. Keep up the good job.

~ Nazi (Nakidasu)~

that is a *really* good poem not many can say hey i can write really good poetry but if you wanted to you could cause your good! keep writting and i'll keep reading
xoxox BJ

Good job alex read mine and coment 2!!! Love U! !

"There just words on a letter,"
It should be They're, not there, since what you're really saying is:
"They are just words on a letter."

I thought this was a good poem. The iines were longer, and that substantially helped make the rhythm stronger. The rhyming was a bit commonplace (most of them are 1 syllable words rhyming with 1 syllable words), but you didn't try to twist around your sentences in order to make the words fit into the rhyme, and you stuck to your scheme the entire way through.