Wow that was really good.. I have problems with my father too.. but he has never hit me.. i still hate him for how he has treated me though.. i'm sorry you had to go through this.. stay strong.. and keep writing!! bye bye EJ

im so sorry if that actually happened, i thought i had it rough, cus my dad died, but apparently. it gets worse

great poem ur really strong. i so hope this wasnt tru ae

i love this poem, its really touching

This is so incredibly sad. Im sure you've heard it before but pretty much the same thing happened to me. Only we were out in public and everybody saw. I've never held more discust for a person. Anyway good poem.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

Is that a true stroy ????
its sad and alot like mine but my dad doesnt beat me

Hey thats a good poem i lyk it that also happened to me but at a younger age

Wow..this was beauitful yet sad. i can tell it came from your heart and you said what you felt and got it off your chest. that's a beautiful thing. i can tell you that i can relate to this, because i went through the same situation with my dad. it was depressing and horrible, but it only made me stronger. job well done. 5/5.

-ashlei.