No friends

by Katelyn   Jun 23, 2005


One girl,
no friends,
she had no one,
yet everyone new her,

she was an outcast,
everyone stared,
but no one cared,
one day she died,

no one knew why,
so everyone didn't care,
but when they seen the daily news,
everyone felt sad,

but until this day it still haunts them.

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  • 19 years ago

    by dArKgOtHiCgIrL

    omg thats really good! keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by DAYLON

    You write good, over time you will become better. Also undying blusher is right bit more emotion and you be making people run for hankies to wipe the tears away, or making people laugh. Depending on what you write about, most of all channel your gift to express more. Also I enjoyed chatting to you on the chat despite my PC frooze. You take care, the Elder.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    hey Katelyn...you are a good writer. you can get even better if you make the lines the same length and you rhyme...showing true emotion is the best way...love it all...

    Take care hun.

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Try to let more emotion come out...keep writing; you'll improve over time. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    hey katelyn, you write sooo good. keep up the good work.
    much love, Marjan

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