im so so so sorry that happened. i hope life gets better for you. that would be a hard thing to live with but keep tryin to mange. im there if u ever want someone to talk to go on my profile and u'll get my email address. if u ever wanna talk just email me.

good poem, its gangsta... lol well Good rhyme scheme keep it up... :)

that was really sad and im sry that it happened to u. i no somethings about that cuz i had a friend die cuz of drugs so just keep ya head up and it will get better. if u can check out some of my poems and comment also.
stacy

I like this poem it is really really good but extremely upsetting if this happrnd i am truely sorry but it was well thought out

jessica

that was awfully wonderful (=P if that makes sense), but really, that was a very very touching poem that moved me and i just simply loved it, thank you for sharing your work even tho it was hard.
take care,
-Allen

Ok..........I read this poem a while back and I thought it was really sad. But overall its a great poem and I like it alot. the flow was great and it was one of the most touching poems I have read...it was great tho. 5/5 Sorry about what happened, but you have to keep it up! ^_^ take care Chris!

That is so sad!

it mad me cry cuz of my life too

im sorry !!

GREAT JOB !

5/5

Oh my gosh, this made me cry... its very well writin and a really sad storry, im very sorry u had to under go such a tramatic expierence... but it does go to show... dont drive under the influence, of ANYTHING!!!! well take care, much love,

Tiffani

5/5

Great job. keep it up

And we all know alcohol is what went wrong
not weed
not coke
and not ecstasy
maybe you snorted something of lesser filth
maybe you took a pill that wasnt as great
but we all know alcohol is the only thing that hurts us and who we love
ban alcohol
make everything else legal

Kool poem....alot of emotions jumped out at me..

october xx

Hey ok wow this poem is awsome! it brought tears to my eyes...i lost 3 friends in car wercks last year and this is just an awsome poem! 5/5 btw great flow and rhyming...not at all too forced!
~bianca~

This was very good actually. I am very fond of rhymes, they keep you atached.

WOWWWWWWWWWW WHAT A STORY
man i could'nd stop reading so sad omg
brought tears to my eyes 5/5 no doubt

Really great poem. It was written well, and i liked it very much.

Very Touching. Sad and emotional.