Wow, thats so sad, great writing though, keep up the writing and stay strong (",)
luv kt

Hey don't be sad. Smile hun! :)

pretty good...could use a lil teeny bit of work tho...
luv always,
Ashli

xxx Excellent poem, that was so sad and deep. I loved it. xxx

great job, again! i loved it! lol.. i don't know what else to say!! it was really great and i gave you a 5!!
abcede

Wow just wow . I love that poem !!!!!!!. I hope you are ok and that you still stay strong ...made me think of myself :)
April~*

Well written however 'to wards' is one word and it should be:
No one WOULD listen to me anyway...

Really interesting, short and sweet!

-Lyd

Love your poems. They touch a part of me I can not share with others. Great depiction again.

whoa...that was deep. that person sounds evil >:-( evil person! well, good poem. 5/5

This was so sad. But written beautifully and i loved the form! very good

aww im sry u feel this way...feel better...keep ur head up and keep on writing!!! btw the poem was great.

THat is so sad!!!!!!!!!!!
BE HAPPY lol much easier said than done right? lol
great job once again

oh ya you never gave me your email addy

lots of love liz

You are a very very talented writer, you know, i think you should get your poems publish, and it just get better one after another, you are just fantastic, magnificent, fabulous, etc.

I love ya gurl,
Hope you are able to live your life happily, and remember there's always someone out there that cares for us.