Glad u like my site. Brilliant poem hun! Great stuff! Goin to fly to Jade tomorrow. Amanda :)

wow! really good! keep it up!
luv always,
Ashli

Awesome job. I loved this poem, it was excellent. xxx

that's really said too! :'(... it flows so well and i really enjoyed reading it!
peace,
Abcede :P

Like I said before . :) Its so great ..... your an awesome writter .nice flow .Be strong
april~*

Good, I like PLEASE HEAR ME better, but still pretty good...

My suggestion: You should have commas at the end, it makes me think that it's one big sentence.
Apart from that good

Continue to write the way you do!

-Lyd

Beautiful. reminds me of letting go of my ex. shows a strong person behind the words.

Well done..well done...great poem

I used to feel this way. I loved this poem! 5'5

wow... excellent i know exatly how u feel keep the great work up and it was great reading ur work

I can really relate to this poem. Very well written.
Excellent poem

DFK :-D