by BrokenMisery Jun 23, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Falling broken, falling down, falling deep |
*tear followed by applause* great peace 10/5 (if possible) great nice flow nice description nice everything lovely job |
by HansRik
This is very emotive and powerful. Great job! Read some of mine if you get time. |
by NannO
that was so sad.. i loved the tinge of .. i dunno.. bitterness, maybe?? am not sure.. but it was overall gr8.. i din reli lyk it from the beginning, but it improved a lot by the middle and the end.. |
by ASPHYXIATED
hey, i tought this was deadly the flow was great and the way you put it all together was good..I don't really think theres anything you could do to make it better i enjoyed it the way it was :D |
by SuperJenius
WoW i loved it it was X-cell-ent |