You did something amazing today

by XKt_ShellyX   Jun 23, 2005


You did something amazing today
And it wasn't because you should
it was nothing you did or didn't say
And I didn't believe that you could

For you just being in my life, I'm glad
You really have had a good effect
Coz now even though I do get sad
I can take a deep breath and reflect

I can see you beautiful smiling face
And I can almost imagine I'm there
in that comforting loving place
Where you kiss me and stroke my hair.

I have an addiction, and you didn't even know
It's not obvious even when you see the scars
It's something you've seen, but I'd never show
You wouldn't understand how quiting is hard

Once you've found away to release sh-t
You carry on, you think you have the cure
But now I've got you I don't need it
Coz I don't need my self harm anymore

~Hope this feeling lasts!~
~Please rate n comment, would mean a lot!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow...that is good. I am glad you feel this way now. I hope it lasts for you too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow...that is good. I am glad you feel this way now. I hope it lasts for you too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Anna

    so glad you've found this feeling, coz not much except people making you feel guilty has stopped you before
    and I know the feelings your on about
    tis love ma hun, tis love!
    I loved the poem
    but then I just love them all
    and you!
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Catty

    i think the poem was excelent. u have a unique ryming style...you ryme every other line...i don't but i like ur style. i think the poem would have been better if u explained what they did but other than that it was AWESOME keep it up!