i think the poem was excelent. u have a unique ryming style...you ryme every other line...i don't but i like ur style. i think the poem would have been better if u explained what they did but other than that it was AWESOME keep it up!

so glad you've found this feeling, coz not much except people making you feel guilty has stopped you before
and I know the feelings your on about
tis love ma hun, tis love!
I loved the poem
but then I just love them all
and you!
xx

Wow...that is good. I am glad you feel this way now. I hope it lasts for you too.

Wow...that is good. I am glad you feel this way now. I hope it lasts for you too.