Cry your eyes out, or become a man!

by Kane Burden   Jun 23, 2005


You fell in love at a young age,
with a girl a lot older then you,
you scored her at a party once,
hoping there would be more,
but she ended up confronting you,
making you unsure.

You so desperately wanted to be with her,
but she didn't feel the same,
so in secret you were together,
but in public only friends.

It messed you up completely,
she played with your emotions,
and although you say you've moved on with your life,
she still lingers in your heart.

There isn't much advice to give,
apart from just move on,
but i know the feeling deep in side,
as if she were the one.

You've tried every stunt in the book,
so its time to get creative,
stop crying your eyes out mate,
and acting like a baby.

Prove to her, you can act her age,
Prove to her, you're a man,
Then bloody well just give it to her,
and show her what you can!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    I guess they call it "friends with benefits" haha... very sad that this happened to you though:( Good poem!

    Ana*

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Nice poem! Very well written! I really like your writing style and the things you have to say!

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Ah yes, I like this one as well...last stanza is my favorite part... hm...makes me wonder - true story?

    Thank you for the comment, Kane. I know there's no need to worry...and yet I still do...way too much. People should be worrying about themselves, true...only that's not always the way it goes... But thanks for the comment, I appreciate it.

    undying blusher
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    Haaaaaaay! a new poem:D felt glad when i saw that you had a new poem there;D hehe.... i have thought a lot of you lately.. sometimes i keep on wondering and wondering if you have answeared me here... Its like a thing i have to do every day, I have to go in and see if you have answeared. The way we look on things in poetry and love is the same, thats why its very fun to write whit you:D

    I looked on your profile, it stood there that you were from Denmark? can i speak danish to you?? that would for sure do things easyer:P hehe.

    I liked your new poem a lot, did you write it reasently? Liked the last verse best, where you encourage the person. And I liked that you talked in a 2end person, like you talked to a friend. I might try that in one of my poems. Never tried it before, looks interesting. You did it very well.

    Theres a thing i want to ask you about. A friend of mine asked me to write a lovepoem, for his sister to have in here wedding, whos next week. Ive tried, but it aint easy to write a lovepoem like that. Like you sad all my poems are about sorrow in love.
    I want to ask you if you want to try?
    A happy love poem to use in a wedding. Must be ready till next week, if you do it. Im hoping so much that you will. It would mean a lot for me, but if you cant i fully respect that, because its little time and all that.

    But anyway. Im hoping soo much to hear from you soon. Kind regards, Kristine.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    yeah magnus, get a grip! :)

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