Comments : One\\\'s Promised

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Really deep and touching:) I especially love how you stated this:

    "My souls been tinged
    With a shade of black so stained"

    Brilliant! Keep writing hun!

    Ana*

  • 19 years ago

    by Schmeg

    I LOVE IT!!!! I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT IT WAS SIMPLY INSPIRATIONAL!!!!!!!! I am kinda going through the same stuff. Keep writing I want to hear more!