Now I Feel

by Laura   Jun 23, 2005


Look into my eyes
Put your arms around me
Now I feel safe
Whisper in my ear
Kiss my neck
Now I feel wanted
Rub my tummy
Play with my hair
Now I feel relaxed
Kiss me softly
And hold me tight
Now I feel loved

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  • 17 years ago

    by Krazy

    Short and sweet. i like it, i can relate really well. i like the emotion it evokes.

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Hehe..memories last forever, too bad the moments dont...AHH MEMORIESSS! dahh. loved thiss, sooooooooo cute! hehe, bie chika

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    I really like this one ALOT! I think the was you expressed all the feelings where wonderful! I loved how I could relat to it so much!

    GREAT JOB!

    p.s. thanx for the comments on the poems and your suggestions where great and I defenitly put them to use

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow, i love this poem. it displayed emotions in a sweet way, maybe not too consise, but short suits this poem. I can definitely relate to this. =D

    I hope u were dwelling on true circumstances, as love is something hard to find.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It was cute. Maybe seperate it every time you start with I feel. I think that's about every two sentences. If you wanted you could have gone more in depth with it. But it was cute and short and sweet as is.