by Laura Jun 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Look into my eyes |
by Krazy
Short and sweet. i like it, i can relate really well. i like the emotion it evokes. |
by carissalynn
Hehe..memories last forever, too bad the moments dont...AHH MEMORIESSS! dahh. loved thiss, sooooooooo cute! hehe, bie chika |
by Sarah
I really like this one ALOT! I think the was you expressed all the feelings where wonderful! I loved how I could relat to it so much! |
by Christie
Wow, i love this poem. it displayed emotions in a sweet way, maybe not too consise, but short suits this poem. I can definitely relate to this. =D |
by Kaylee
It was cute. Maybe seperate it every time you start with I feel. I think that's about every two sentences. If you wanted you could have gone more in depth with it. But it was cute and short and sweet as is. |