I like your poem! It was cute and filled with Love

It was cute. Maybe seperate it every time you start with I feel. I think that's about every two sentences. If you wanted you could have gone more in depth with it. But it was cute and short and sweet as is.

Wow, i love this poem. it displayed emotions in a sweet way, maybe not too consise, but short suits this poem. I can definitely relate to this. =D

I hope u were dwelling on true circumstances, as love is something hard to find.

xxx

I really like this one ALOT! I think the was you expressed all the feelings where wonderful! I loved how I could relat to it so much!

GREAT JOB!

p.s. thanx for the comments on the poems and your suggestions where great and I defenitly put them to use

Hehe..memories last forever, too bad the moments dont...AHH MEMORIESSS! dahh. loved thiss, sooooooooo cute! hehe, bie chika

Short and sweet. i like it, i can relate really well. i like the emotion it evokes.