Simon - I always like your poems and this one is no exception. I see the sadness in it and understand the pain.

I really liked this poem...good writing

First off, the flow is flawless. Next, the imagery....outstanding. The entire piece is captivating. Well done~Holly

Very nice poem! I like the rhymes and I like the imagery! Very calm and relaxing.

I like the flow of this poem , it's reali nicely written...fantastic job! :) X