Comments : Raped...a fathers betrayal

  • 19 years ago

    by DarkLore

    There are no words to do justice to this expression of feeling, thankyou for sharing with us.

  • 19 years ago

    by holly

    this was an amazing poem thankyou for writing it i went threw this from the time i was in grade 3 with my step brother. Many sleep less nights i know how it is.
    good work feel free to check out some of my poems

    holly

  • 19 years ago

    by SoMeb0dyDiFfeRenT

    ur poem, i really like it.
    I have a friend who was molested and sexually abused since she was 4 or 5 until she was 14. i know how it feels to know ur best friend went thru pain a little girl should nvr have to deal with. im glad u wrote about it. its inspiring to know that u dont have to hide but u can make sure ppl kno so they can get help.
    sRy about taking so much space in ur comment section.

    sHinYstArinMyeYe

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    BRILLIANT!!!!!!! 5/5
    Don't blame yourself for what your friend has gone through. It's her father's fault for all of her pain. He WILL rot in hell for what he's done, don't see how that could be forgiven....i really like this poem. I wouldn't be surprised at all if this showed up on the highest rating chart. I'll be watching out for it. :) Well, you and your friend, please take care! Peace and Luv, //ari\\

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow very strongly written, I'm so sorry for your friend....No one should have to go through something like that, NO ONE!!! I hope he rots in hell for what he did...

    I as her best friend
    I guess I shoulda knew
    He deserves to rot in hell
    For what he’s put her through

    Just like you said... How could you have known??? You couldn't, don't blame yourself, the only one to blame is HIM!!! God I don't know him, but I hate him so much!!! Hope that your friend is ok??? I sent her my best wishes...

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by XKt_ShellyX

    Oh, how awful, I really wish there wasn't so much sh!t in the world.
    People make me so mad, I hope he rots in hell...
    I was abused as a child, and having friends to talk to or to just be there even if i dont wana talk make's me feel so much better.

    I hope your friend is ok...?

    excellent poem, really deep, lots of emotion.

    keep it up 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ©TheCornerOfTheEnd

    wow im lost 4 words i had 2 put up with that but then i told him 2 f###off ..........but not every1 is as loud mouthed as me
    so she is very brave xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    This is so sad. I was in the same situation from the time i was 5 till i was 13. My dad was in jail when he hung himself this april. I have to say i wasn't sad at all. I don't tell people about . I keep it a secret i guess. ITs embarrassing. I did write a poem about it called Stolen Innonse. Maybe you could check it out.. If not thats cool. Anyways. THis poem is very well written and your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you

  • OMG!! That is an awesome poem..I give it a 5/5..Great Job!! so sorry if that is true it is very sad but like i said it is also very good...

  • 19 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    i hope your friend is ok it must be a terrible burden to her good on you for being there for her well expressed poem its very very good

  • 19 years ago

    by steph

    it was just a well riten poem. i reali reali likd it.but 2 fink ppl do dis 2 dere children is disgusting. its soo rong. neway great poem
    comment sum of mine if u hav time thx xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Redden

    great poem...i like it..its well written..sorry about your friend..hope everything goes well...if ya have the chance check out my poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Chris

    great poem!!!