I thought this one was ok. hon

Intersting

Simply beautiful.

Awsome poem!
Keep up the good work!

i like it. could use some work but i still give it a 5/5
love
paulette

You choose your words well I've noticed. But shoving too many adjectives kinda ruins the beauty of a poem. It's like a girl, she can look beautiful with and without makeup. Adding too much make up, can make her look ugly. Otherwise, nice job.

again beutifuly written, it is filled with wonderful images, and creates and irry feeling, that is quickly smothed over. good.

~Breeze

throughout that whole poem i kept striving for the next line. great job. thats a real sign of a great poet.

I could actually see the perfect night in my head. Just beautiful, I loved it ღ

great use of words, not your best work but still good. keep writing!!

i reallylike the way you describe this night

hmm it was interesting. it dont rhyme so its different than im used too. but it was good..4/5

I normally dont go for poems that dont rhyme but you did a great job on this....luv yas mwah

-kayla-