Die Slow

by Lydie   Jun 24, 2005


Death,
Burned,
Lessons
Learned,

Forgotten,
Nights,
Awful,
Fights,

Soft,
Tears,
Broken,
Fears,

Friends,
Lost,
Unsatisfying,
Cost,

Pain,
Begin,
Awful,
Sin,

Assorted,
Creatures,
Ferocious,
Features,

Eating,
Chewing,
Choking,
Spewing,

Menacing,
Skills,
Knives,
Thrills,

Feel,
Low,
Die,
Slow

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  • 19 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey i liked the poem.. i loved the style especially how the 2nd and 4th lines ryhmed through your whole poem.. most people try and ryhme the whole poem and i have tried that myself but i liked this style more than most!! bye bye EJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I like it, simple and nearly flawless....well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    It made sense. nice rythem and beat better read aloud. nice job

  • 19 years ago

    by Julie

    Oooohhh! That nice!! I've always wanted to write something like that but I could never get it down quite right!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    That was cool short and simple, and the words explain it all :) welldone i like it
    5/5
    xox Bam

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