That was cool short and simple, and the words explain it all :) welldone i like it
5/5
xox Bam

Oooohhh! That nice!! I've always wanted to write something like that but I could never get it down quite right!

It made sense. nice rythem and beat better read aloud. nice job

I like it, simple and nearly flawless....well done.

Hey i liked the poem.. i loved the style especially how the 2nd and 4th lines ryhmed through your whole poem.. most people try and ryhme the whole poem and i have tried that myself but i liked this style more than most!! bye bye EJ