Darkness, My Friend

by Lydie   Jun 24, 2005


Darkness,
My friend,
Talk to me,
Again,

I,
Must not,
Cry, Not like,
Then,

Darkness,
My friend,
Don\'t leave me,
Here,

I,
Hate him,
His look of,
Leer,

Darkness,
My friend,
Please become my,
Life,

If,
You don\'t,
I grab my,
Knife,

Darkness,
My friend,
My sign of,
Midnight,

Through,
The day,
Even when it\'s,
Bright,

Darkness,
My friend,
My shadow I,
Keep,

Leave,
Me in,
A world so,
Deep,

Darkness,
My friend,
I was hopeless,
Then,

Return,
To me,
Talk to me,
Again.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    The way you did the lines was really cool, it added to the poem a lot. 5/5. Very creative, as well.

  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    I love the structure you used, very effective. The poem flowed beautifully.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Intruiging scheme, and well conveyed.

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Its alot better then My black world. very unusual way to put the line but catchy none-the-less

  • 19 years ago

    by Madison

    Good work! I really liked how the poem was layed out, differnt yet cool.
    Keep up the good work.!

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