I am a Jelly Doughnut (Acrostic Poem)

by !*!Zoe!*!   Jun 24, 2005


I

Am
Myself.

Alone.

Jelly-filled, with powdered sugar
Encasing my fried exterior.
Look at me.
Like me.
You simply turn away.

Do you
Only like the
Unoriginal
Glazed ones?
However delicious I may be,
No-one likes me (or will even try me)
Unlike
The prissy Boston Cremes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by abcede

    Omg, i love how you encased this poem in such an awesome metaphor 5/5, babe - totally ROCKS!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Lol wow this was a very good poem.. very very unique but I loved it. and to be honest I love the jelly filled ones. Beautiful work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Thanks alot i want donouts now but i rellylikedthis poem funny and creative
    take care
    HS

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice One! Now you've made me hungry.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    hehe that's a cool poem !!! now i wanna eat...ok, gone to the kitchen !!! love you !!!
    E.

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