I liked this! A lot! Very original, creative... Living in France, eh? Do you like it there, or is America better? Great job, 5/5
Car

lol, so cute and it was funny too!! great poem.. and those are so difficult to flow, but you did it very well!! 5/5!
love,
abcede ^,^

(maybe you could check out some of my poems)

As always amazing Zoe you are so talented and I hope one day you will make it very big. 5/5 as always

made me smile.. i havent really smiled since i left paris. thanks. keep writing. i wish i could

hehe that's a cool poem !!! now i wanna eat...ok, gone to the kitchen !!! love you !!!
E.

Nice One! Now you've made me hungry.

Regards,

Steve

Thanks alot i want donouts now but i rellylikedthis poem funny and creative
take care
HS

Lol wow this was a very good poem.. very very unique but I loved it. and to be honest I love the jelly filled ones. Beautiful work.

Omg, i love how you encased this poem in such an awesome metaphor 5/5, babe - totally ROCKS!