wow what an amazing poem, good job 5/5
~*lindz*~

tnx Lindsay! i really admire u as a poet! so it's a great compliment 4 me!

Great poem 5* thanks for the comment on my poem.

~*~ Good job I rate it 5, Keep up the good work!~*~

good job, wow man if you learned to play the guitar, you should write music for these poems and turn them into songs.

Rach

This is a great poem, and yeah it would make a great song.

SUperlativE work dude !!
~HazE

I really felt the emotion of the poem, niece work

Touching-- seems like you're going through a lot...

Love,
Ipsita

I like the honesty in this poem..i think this is the wish of most of us..to find somebody who is willing to share and understand our way of life.. keep on writing poems like this..

Beautiful poem. alot of emotion and depth. i particularly liked the lines:

"...Navigate in the sorrow of blank sea
Come and taste my destiny..."

great word play. good write and well done! -do you write music? this would indeed make an awsome song!