omg!! i feel the same way .. well, lol, i have a situation like this!! great job! i love the slang!

great poem, its really sweet ^.^

it was nothing i havn't read before, dont get me wrong, it was still good. but you also had alot of spelling mistakes..like no..it should be know...they're two different meanings...even tho they sound the same. thats just one of my pet pieves..so yeah. it was nice..but nothing out of the origional.