nicely done!! the idea and structure was very well done, keep it up! life can sux huh!? keep your chin up! 5/5

Another excellent poem, I hope to read more soon.

This one got me on the edge of crying. I don't know what it's like to be daddy's little "girl" lol. or even momma's boy. It's something that no one really need's cause I think it spoils people. Good job though. kilman = David B. 5/5

WOW that was such a strong poem! It flowed niceely and it is something Im sure many ppl can relate to! 5

That's really good.

Wow, I know just how you feel, I have a similar poem. You portrayed your emotions well, and kept a nice flow. This just shows how strong you are. Great job.

~rolo

I wrote a poem like this. My mom packed us up and left right after I turned 6 and it was so hard living without a father. MANY people can relate to this poem. Nice job expressing your feelings without being mean or resentful... ;) Nice write!!

Aww! This is so sad...I loved it though. The rhyming was perfect and the poem flowed really good. I'm so sorry if you really feel this way. :( Keep up the great work. xx Stay Strong

wow...very emotional indeed...a lot of passion wheter it is from a personal exp. or just made up.the whole idea was wonderful and the last line was what made it all come together,very nice.

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So sad. I understand exactly what you mean...I think. lol, I mean, I can relate completely to this poem but it's possible that I'm interpreting it different than you intended.

I hope that makes sense.

Keep up the awesome work...I want to read even more!

i'm sorry... i'm not daddys little girl either... love your poem...
meg

touching, very touching, but i don't know that it belongs in this category. anyway, i could really feel the sadness that you have about your father... hope everything is alright... take care!

I am soo very sorry that your dad left you. my father left me too i know how that freals if you read my poem father what did i do.. i think you would like and i bet you feel that same way. 5.5

Awww I feel the same and I relate so much I just started crying..You feel the same way as me...And then, i see all my friends with BOTH parents..i dont know..

good job

*Tears* Wow. I can definately relate to this poem in many ways. I haven't talked to my real dad in many many years and for me it is kind of hard to not know where he is or how he is doing. But lately I have been beginning to except that he will never be here with me. You're a fantastic writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Amazing, superb poem, all I can do is stand in awe, this is truly incredible, keep p the fantastic work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Aww thats so sad, its very good and very moving to read well done xxxxxxxx