Weather.

by brin macnamara   Jun 24, 2005


I wish I were the weather then you'd talk about me all day.
Rain, so that I could delicately trickle through your hair and caress your cheeks.
I wish I were thunder then all the neighbourhood would hear me say that I Love You!

Lightning, so that I could carve your name across the sky.
I wish I were a gentle breeze that whispers in your ear carrying words of love
And a tornado to sweep you off your feet !!

(for AMB)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Inner Critic

    An excellent metaphor highlighting the sheer desire to express your feelings about someone you love. Powerful stuff, love.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elmo o_O

    omg i love this POEM!! it is a sweet poem...

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Wow, that was great. The concept was highly original and very pleasing. Good job... I cant get over what a great concept it is, sounds liek something i would write... good job :)

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