Wow, that was great. The concept was highly original and very pleasing. Good job... I cant get over what a great concept it is, sounds liek something i would write... good job :) |
by Elmo o_O
omg i love this POEM!! it is a sweet poem... |
by Inner Critic
An excellent metaphor highlighting the sheer desire to express your feelings about someone you love. Powerful stuff, love. |