Comments : Weather.

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Wow, that was great. The concept was highly original and very pleasing. Good job... I cant get over what a great concept it is, sounds liek something i would write... good job :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Elmo o_O

    omg i love this POEM!! it is a sweet poem...

  • 18 years ago

    by Inner Critic

    An excellent metaphor highlighting the sheer desire to express your feelings about someone you love. Powerful stuff, love.