Wonerfully done!!! |
by abcede
wow... refreshingly different!! awesome!! i'm gland u kinda went in a different direction and expanded to different areas of poetry!! great job!! 5/5 |
by Marjan
You write so wonderfully. really talented. I like your poems. |
again another good one :) your better than me.. lol |
by Brookeღ
Wow that was brilliant! Very well written! I feel that way about my son. He is now 11 they grow up so fast. I think he will be my only one though! Good message in this poem! Take Care! Brooke |
:) its one of those poems that make you go awww... :) but anyways..thats the first i read about a mother and son.. :) it was really cute |
by Ashli
good job, i really enjoyed this poem! keep it up! |
by Lex
Good poem |
by Andrea
Awwwwwwwwww so sweet |
You have kids?? well, anyways it was good i liked it, but there were a few spelling mistakes. |
by amelia
Nicely written 5/5 of course !! |
by Andrea
Awwww..its so sweet! |
Aw, very sweet : ) |
by HansRik
This is an excellent poem. I like the beginning (and it is very appropriate). The development is efficient, and the structure coherent. In short, this is truly wonderful. My only complaint is this is a bit 'slangy' and maybe this should belong in that section. In any case, the imagery and diction are great. Well done! |
by Atomic
I like this poem very much, but you see.... |
Gr8 sho of emmotion, and wonderful rhyming. no rhymes seemd forced...gr8 work! 5/5 |
by Mezmeryz
Awww...sucha sweet and cute poem...and its so tru. its so cute... keep it up! |