Comments : Love of your life

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonerfully done!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by abcede

    wow... refreshingly different!! awesome!! i'm gland u kinda went in a different direction and expanded to different areas of poetry!! great job!! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    You write so wonderfully. really talented. I like your poems.
    love you, Marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    again another good one :) your better than me.. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow that was brilliant! Very well written! I feel that way about my son. He is now 11 they grow up so fast. I think he will be my only one though! Good message in this poem! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    :) its one of those poems that make you go awww... :) but anyways..thats the first i read about a mother and son.. :) it was really cute

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashli

    good job, i really enjoyed this poem! keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lex

    Good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Awwwwwwwwww so sweet

  • 19 years ago

    by sadnessinshadows

    You have kids?? well, anyways it was good i liked it, but there were a few spelling mistakes.

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Nicely written 5/5 of course !!
    good luck !
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Awwww..its so sweet!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Aw, very sweet : )

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is an excellent poem. I like the beginning (and it is very appropriate). The development is efficient, and the structure coherent. In short, this is truly wonderful. My only complaint is this is a bit 'slangy' and maybe this should belong in that section. In any case, the imagery and diction are great. Well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    I like this poem very much, but you see....

    It's not a universal thing, because some mothers all over the world would gladly give up their baby for money, for the "love of their life" and etcetera.

    I realy like this, there's nothing I can complain about.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 sho of emmotion, and wonderful rhyming. no rhymes seemd forced...gr8 work! 5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Awww...sucha sweet and cute poem...and its so tru. its so cute... keep it up!
    :)
    xxx