it gave me the chills girl! i really hope your ok, you are a wonderful friend to have and a wonderful poet! wish i could help you more than just say these words of encouragement from so far away. just keep looking forward and don't look back keep hope. wonderful poem, like always! keep it up!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Thanks for the comment on my poem Chuckie. I love the emotion you show in all of your poems! you really show your personality through your poems!
good work 5/5

so much pain and sadness put in to this poem but I still love it!

Good jobz

-Josiah

words twisted into a realistic portrait. It made me feel as though i was right there, beside you as it happened. very moving, excellent for a girl your age. id expect it to be written by a person older. thats talent girl. it was written beautifully.