great poem! i love it! dark and beautifully worded! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

i love it...it's so0o0o0o dark but yet beautiful at the same time... i don't know i just like it!

all your work is amazing.
i spec love this poem.
xx

*me in complete shock*... man this poem is wat i call a BOMB. Its very amazing, the way you wrote it and the way it was dark, i especially liked your title..The Unforgiven.. its amazing. Well keep on writing and ill be tuned!

Wow just about the best poem I've seen in a while for a short little one. I give you a five and if you havn't already give your self a 5 for this one 2. You deserve it. I've godda come up with rymeing words like you use. There more interesting and make the poem better no matter how short.

i loved it. hope that u find god again and return to the light as i know i must. for the end is comming and i wnat to live in heaven's devine