Last Time (Addiction)

by †JustAri†   Jun 24, 2005


Creative lines of red
Leaking on sallow skin
When?s the last time
Or will there be more?

Burying the razor
Deep inside your flesh
Don?t you recall
Saying before was your last?

Just one more slice
Just one more cut
Just one more time
To chop these feelings up

Only one last time
To listen to the rip of the shell
Releasing the nagging pain
The pain that was meant to kill

Creative lines of red
Scabbing on sallow skin
When?s the last time
Ever going to happen?

*I?m working on a longer version of this, possibly a song, but i don't know....and i?m also working on an alternate ending, i guess you would call it.....well, hope you liked it! Peace!....*

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by stephanie

    hey i like it 5/5....it would be kool to have a song of it.....well thanks for comment/vote on mine plz read more....
    -stephanie-

  • 19 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    wonderful and sad poem I really dont hope that its true...

    -Josiah

  • 19 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Good job on the poem I've written SoOoOoOo many poems on cutting you would think its all I do night and day you should read someof my stuff

    *~*RetniapDoolb*~*

    P.S. My poems may not be that good but I'm not that good at anything

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    awww i love it. it just fits together so greatly and flows really well. again i hope things are ok for you, this is the second cutting poem by you i've read in a row and maybe you don't relate to them but i just want you to know that i care and am ALWAYS around for you!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    I know how you feel. I always let myself cut because I promise myself it will be the last time. I definatelly think it would make an awesome song, but it also makes a great poem.

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