this poem was good, i liked it 5/5, really long tho, but the long ones are better lol, thanx for commentin on my poem, i really apprieciated it
harley

Thats a really good poem, but really sad too. I hope this isn't real, but if it is, i hope you are o.k. Keep writing, you definately have a talent.

w0w, your poems really amaze me, your an excellent writer, keep up the great work!!!

That poem was amazing. it just reminds me so much of my boyfriend who passed away. it means alot to me that a poet as talented as you taed on my poems thank-you thispoem really brought back some memories of my boyfriend
always near em xXx

Good job I uh know the feeling hehe
It sucks :(
Good Write
5/5