My Story

by JustAFoolInLove   Jun 25, 2005


The darkness was fading
So slowly, but still
I saw some light growing
Where none had been before
The searing, new brightness
Stood so solid before me
Until this day, at last
It was torn open my chance
And my life did more
Than flash before my eyes;
The whole fvcking nightmare
Repeated itself

So let me tell my story
Of how this came to be
And you will see that all of this
Is not yet history

I was born with a curse
Of anti-happiness
But since I shed this curse
I’ve been at my worst

I’m not the person I used to be
I can no longer live comfortably
I hate the person I’ve become
So to the darkness, I succumb

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I'm glad that you're better now...back then you used to really scare me, but now I trust that you won't hurt yourself beyond repair. And if you do, well...God only knows I'll be waiting for the day you want to talk to me again.

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    rob, the rest of my poems tell how i got here. ty for your comment! you're nice

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    This shows alot of strong emotion but does not show how or why you got there I think if you can show your reader that the poem would be more powerful just a thought...

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I love YOU. because you will always be YOU. and I'll never know anyone else like I know you. You are irreplaceable, and don't you ever succumb to the darkness. God's light is worth it. I love ya!

  • 19 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    Zach...I'm so sorry, I hope that you are ok...don't give up please...

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