Comments : Hoping

  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Nice poem! I got the message you were sending through it quite well and it really does prove a point. I don't know why but I just loved the sentence:
    'I arrive and wait'.
    It as very... very much like a cliffhanger in some way, I don't know lol. Well, i like your poem, keep it up!

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

  • 19 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    wow this is a cool poem! me likes! well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Great poem. Very deep, which i really like. I hope the girl comes to you soon.

    -Jennifer.

  • 19 years ago

    by edsel

    Cool

  • 19 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    That is so deep, and i hope that the girl comes to you, you deserve it hey

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work, I really liked the whole idea of the poem.