Wow this is such a cute poem! 5

short but good intentions 5/5

although your poems are very short but they have the meaning itself n these little words
i like your style
its defferent from the others and it makes you special
good luck with the coming ones
XoXoXoXoX
Nema

Short yet still emotional and well written, well done good poem

wow another great poem.. keep it up!

omg great poem... really liked it!! please check out my new poem "feelings i CAnt overcome" n tell me wat u fink MWaZz..stephy :):)

Wow I suck at short poems, but this is absolutely amazing!! You really have the talent for the short stuff...lol. Good job!!

.:j0y:.

i feel like dat i love your poem

Thanks for all the comments. <3

So sad! Once again so much emotion with just a few words! Great work! ~Brooke~

This one is better than the last love poem i read.

This one is better than the last love poem i read.

Aw...your poems do seem to be pretty universal...

"In my heart Forever
You will stay"

Instead...I think it may be better as:

"In my heart

You will stay

Forever"

or...

"Forever

In my heart

You will stay"

Just to make the forever more emphasized...
Works how you have it though...lovely work.

xxx

wow good poem once again short but to the point cute poem...keep it up!!
luv yas mwah

-kayla-