by Jennifer Fox or Jackson Jun 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Beyond the tired eyes |
by Ashli
nice job! nice flow and word choice! i couldn't find the one you asked me to read, so i'll comment on a couple more! keep it up! |
by Jason Meres
I like it, had a good flow and emotion to it, a few minor mistakes here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed with a quick re-read. Well done. |
by Marjan
oh, this is sooo beautifully written. |
by Cara
Jen This is such a great poem i'm glad that were both back to writing again love u and miss you bunches!! |
by MelindaJoy
wow very good, Ive been through things like that, keep it up |