wow very good, Ive been through things like that, keep it up

Jen This is such a great poem i'm glad that were both back to writing again love u and miss you bunches!!

oh, this is sooo beautifully written.
I really enjoyed reading this. You're
really really talented.
much love, Marjan

I like it, had a good flow and emotion to it, a few minor mistakes here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed with a quick re-read. Well done.

nice job! nice flow and word choice! i couldn't find the one you asked me to read, so i'll comment on a couple more! keep it up!