by ZOMGEMO
Hey, beautiful poem, great questions and wonderful flow... amazing writing =) |
I am loving this poem! id had this problem for a while myself.... you took the words right out of my mouth! it had a great flow, and it was very easy to follow, also loved the emotion you showed it well! |
Very beautifully written keep it up |
No, no one knows the answer except you yourself, you gonna have to find it out yourself...okey...and keep up with your studies...best wishes... |
I love it it reminds me of one of my poems that I wrote last year I don't have it posted because my damn mom took all my books and so I can't right now but when I do, I would like you to read it and tell my what you think. I like this poem also becasue it is how I feel too. I'm afraid to go to sleep at night most of the time and when I do I don't get any rest. But any way again...I love it!!! |
by Megzie
It rhymed without being childish, I really love it. Beautiful piece. |
I could really realte to your poem. I gave your a 5 and I think you have real talent. It would be great if you could read my poems and give me a few pointers. Again really I liked your poem. |